He May Not Have Beaten the Hare-But He Did Beat the Fire

echoes from fallen timber, tucks his head
slowly escaping the smoke 
he lives another day 


Kimo Poetry 
Sponsor Dear Heart 
3/21/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 4:21 AM
- A great kimo, Charlie :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 3:50 AM
very descriptive Charles:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Pretty clever, Charles.
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