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He Marked His Spot

he marked his spot on the beach and warned everyone not to touch it Keeping his tiny seashell safe we kept it there for years as a reminder that he had existed and that we loved him

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/5/2022 9:39:00 PM

The sentiment you've expressed resonates so well with me. I remember having all sorts of peculiar momentos -- an old stick, a piece of rope, etc. -- to remind me of places and people who otherwise be long forgotten. Interesting, Caren. Thanks, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/6/2022 2:00:00 AM

I like this idea too

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/5/2022 8:23:00 AM

Somehow I feel like this situation had a tragic ending.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/6/2022 2:00:00 AM

Yes and I received a gold medallion for it on AP