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He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

Petals fall golden in hue, one by one soft to the touch. Baskets of flowered hope end in sad "he love's me not." Laughing and running, over love's broken glass. Prism dreams are shattered black and white. Dawn awakens to bid goodbye to the night's yawn. The robin's cheery song is full of woe. . Love that was given was stripped and now stands naked and alone, clothed only by the sun's warmth. . Left with nothing more than a yarn of tangled thoughts. Contest Entry for First Love Poem

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Date: 11/28/2011 5:51:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Sandy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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