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He Loves Her

I love loving her
she loves me she loves me not 
daisy scent fulfills

Copyright © Betty Bateson | Year Posted 2014

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June 22, 2014 at 5:23 AM

This is a beautiful haiku, Betty! Congrats on a top win. // paul

Shadow Hamilton

June 20, 2014 at 7:50 AM

Betty good write congrats on win

June 19, 2014 at 5:53 AM

Beautiful haiku. Congrats on your win...

Poet Destroyer A

June 18, 2014 at 11:26 PM

Hi Betty, a sweet haiku. Congratulations:)~ Enjoyed, reading every awesome poem on Richard's L, Gender Bender winning list. ... XoX.... LINDA

June 18, 2014 at 8:04 PM

Beautiful Betty...congrats...Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 18, 2014 at 3:47 PM

the last line..... :D sweet.. :) kudos!

June 18, 2014 at 2:57 PM

simple and sweet, a beautiful haiku i wish love was as simple as picking the petals off flowers :)

June 18, 2014 at 12:53 PM

Lovely win...SKAT

June 18, 2014 at 10:59 AM

Lovely Haiku a well deserved winner. Hugs jan xx

June 18, 2014 at 9:56 AM

Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Gender Bender,

Richard Lamoureux

June 18, 2014 at 9:15 AM

Simple and perfect. Congratulations.

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