He Left Her a White Rose

Its the morning after the night before
As i leave my new wife, whom i lovingly adore

My orders came through, overseas i head
With my band of brothers, not knowing what's ahead

    Married for days, whilst conflict takes him away
    Holding sheets where we slept, my memory bouquet

    At the bottom of our bed, there lies a virgin white rose
    With a note beneath i am in momentary froze

    I sit and stare as to what it might say
    Knowing this is the day my love flies away

My darling Tinks i leave this white rose for you
Its pristine appearance describes my darling so true

It symbolises you, so innocent so pure
With your love in my heart, i will return i assure

Think of the day, from these distant lands from beyond
For the morning after the night before, we will respond

    This virgin white rose, so bridal so pure
    You and its safety i will secure, for you to return for our future

    The day you come home, it shall lay on our bed
    And we will continue our lives, as you have always said

    I will go about my tomorrow's, thinking of you every day
    And prey that this virgin white rose, never turns deathly grey





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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/16/2010 12:32:00 PM
Going to my favs
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Date: 4/16/2010 8:45:00 AM
this is a beautiful poem, i love how it's so romantic...i did check out your website http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/ and i must say, you are one of the very few people i know that have a beyond amazing talent for poetry...if you don't mind me suggesting, perhaps you could make it into a book?...and thnx for your comments on my poems...Great You, and God Bless...-Brittany-
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Date: 4/4/2010 10:28:00 PM
So Wonderful Fraser......this morning i wrote a Senryu about a Rose..then i come here and read this gem..awesome..Charma
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Date: 4/3/2010 5:08:00 PM
Lovely, just lovely ( and thank God it wasn't red)
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