He Hated Her

He hated
All that she stood for
He was rude
So hurtful
My love shall be above his
We shall delete him

Russell Sivey


Form: Shadorma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 6:59 PM
past luvs should always be deleted Russell for when the true luv comes along .. no one misses those deleted ones.. clever sequence of lines luv.. and I agree wholeheartedly...
Wesley Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 11:24 AM
Delete with no effort and one finger - so neat, so complete! So few lines say it so well - how are you my friend?
Horne Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Yes, indeed - well said, my friend
Johnson Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 1:44 AM
nastiness need the deleters knife, better without the not very nice, with a tiny touch of salt petre... on ya Russell Cobber...
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