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He Hated Her

He hated All that she stood for He was rude So hurtful My love shall be above his We shall delete him Russell Sivey Form: Shadorma

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/10/2011 6:59:00 PM

past luvs should always be deleted Russell for when the true luv comes along .. no one misses those deleted ones.. clever sequence of lines luv.. and I agree wholeheartedly...

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/10/2011 11:24:00 AM

Delete with no effort and one finger - so neat, so complete! So few lines say it so well - how are you my friend?

Jack Horne

Date: 10/10/2011 10:21:00 AM

Yes, indeed - well said, my friend

Don Johnson

Date: 10/10/2011 1:44:00 AM

nastiness need the deleters knife, better without the not very nice, with a tiny touch of salt petre... on ya Russell Cobber...