He Has Only Just Begun Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Regina Mcintosh
Date: 09-06-2024
As long as he was hale and hearty, has not uttered the name of God. Until things went well as per his plan, has not offered prayers to Him. Taking pride in his youthful vigour, and very handsome Cupid figure, has not felt His holy presence. Failing to see Him in every heart, and running after physical pleasures, he whiled away his precious time. Now, having lost his wealth and health, the Enlightenment has dawned upon him! Feeling the burden of his life, for solace, in times of grief and loss, having come to know that God is his path and destination, his spiritual journey towards the Almighty he has only just begun!!
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