He Has Only Just Begun

The chirping of the first bird to which I listen
And the first ray of the sun that glistens
Are not the beginnings, yet, continuations?
Of his caring hand, carrying on its liberation
Like untimely drizzling and winged termites
Surprises set in with inexplicable delights.
Each petal that unfurls from fresh flowers
Rays that spread out like rainbow showers
Movements of the mind and heart with feelings
Timely movement of the sun above the ceilings
Birds and beasts have good and bad times.
Hearts chant songs of the almighty in chimes.
Each act he begins, like ripples on water, spreads
With the emerging moon, his graces flow ahead.
Each moment is an era of mercy in his hands.
They're countless, like gold-dust-like desert sands.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Proxenos Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 1:43 PM
What is man that he should be so bold, so enticing, so enhancing, so perturbed and so anxious - it is a must he must find a means of survival, a means to be able to live and not die. the soul must be awoken to the miraculous ability of existence. An awesome creative piece of poetry Alex. Blessings, Jennifer
Alex Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 7:01 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 12:24 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. What a great ending you have here... Have A Blessed/Wonderful Day....................
Alex Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 7:01 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Rodgers Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Dear Christuraj, your poem radiates divine wonder and gratitude for the Almighty's ceaseless grace. The chirping birds, glistening sunrays, and unfurling petals intertwine beautifully with the metaphysical themes. You wonderfully captured how each moment brims with mercy and continuation of the sacred, like "ripples on water" or "desert sands." This transcendent piece awakens the soul to the miracle of existence. Breathtakingly insightful and inspiring! - Blessings, Daniel
Alex Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 7:01 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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