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He Had Started Responding

He had started responding 
To death tapping at his door
Fog crowded on his glasses

He was a medical student
Carcinogens had loved his pancreas
Would you mind coming with me
The growing fog said

Could the young stallion
Hear the mortal footsteps
While making love 
With the green meadows

It came to a standstill
The handler was at a loss
Did the green ground 
The purple mounds
Lose interest 
In the equine vibration

The handler complied with
The animal Instinct


It followed the hospital smell
It pursued the smell of death
Went straight to the deathbed

Breath was taking time to arise
From the darkening lungs

The stallion's nose wandered
On his face and arm

Then it stood still
Deep eye to eye communication
Between animal and human


Smile couldn't stop
Its footsteps on his lips

The fresh scent of life allured him
He could feel the doors
The stallion had opened
With love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/13/2018 4:23:00 PM
beautiful transformation of care between man and animal... i like this, probir!...huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/13/2018 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Nette ...

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