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He Gave Her a Book

In two days, she’d marry the love of her life,
She always dreamed of becoming a wife.

But she was a bit sad; she never knew her dad,
As far as parents go, her mom was all she had.

Lost in her thoughts, she heard a thud outside,
it was a package; she wondered what was inside.

She closed the door and opened the box up,
to her surprise, it was a book and a coffee cup.


The title of the book was “ I Give You My Heart”
the note read, I loved you from the very start.

I'm sorry I couldn't be apart of your life, my child,
I got terminally ill, your thoughts may be running wild.

Immediately, she shed tears for a dad, she never knew,
as she continued to read, she was no longer sad and blue.

In the book, you'll learn who your father is,
you'll see I love science; in fact, I'm a whiz

I also gave you my favorite cup; it's special to me,
live life to the full and may it be filled with glee.







First Place Win
Contest: HE GAVE HER A BOOK
Sponsor: Mystic Rose
05/24/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Smith Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 10:58 AM
did the dad drop off the book, or the dad wrote the book and someone dropped it off? (even if it's fictional i figure you could imagine which way it happened...) :O so moving!
Edmonds  Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Back with congratulations on your much deserved win, well done… Belle
Kauffman Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 1:42 PM
A beautiful wedding day gift, Alexis. Congratulations on your win. Well told story! Blessings!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings............
Roper Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Alexis, great story. Congratulations on your win in Mystic Rose contest. Hugs Eve
Alex Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Again, great work. Congratulations!
Rose  Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 8:49 AM
You made me drop a tear with this poem dear Alexis, how tender that marriage moment can be when dad is not around. Beautiful poem penned, thanks for joining and congrats
Y. Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Hi Mystic, Thank you so much. Your contest prompt was the inspiration for such a write. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 10:52 AM
This is so well written! brilliant. all the best in the contest!
Y. Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 9:35 AM
Hi Krish, Thank you so much. Have a great day;-)Alexis
Edmonds  Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 7:09 PM
What a gift you have Alexis, this is wonderful, truly touching and beautiful… Belle
Proxenos Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:20 AM
This is an amazing poem Alexis my friend - you wrote it with great passion and intense love - be blessed my friend - a memorable gift fell in your lap, cherish it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Ball Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Oh this is such a bittersweet piece Alexis. A real tear jerker. Beautifully written and well expressed it was a joy to read. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
Ricci Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Hello Alexis - Be proud of this entry. It is one of your best. The theme truly held the emotive factor that came through to the reader. Beautiful in every way. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy poetry soup.
Daniel Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 5:23 AM
That's a memorable gift, Alexis, I like the story you create:) I still have no idea what to write on..
Alex Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 11:35 PM
So beautiful. In fact, I read your poems. They are, indeed, delightful. You are a winner of many contests as well. There's a glow in your writings.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 10:25 PM
A poem built on an emotion that one can never forget. So well done/ Best for a win.
Chiri Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:59 PM
Simply lovely Alexis!;)
Buehler Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 4:10 PM
What a special wedding gift the book from her father was, and how wonderful to discover that he'd loved her all along. I wouldn't be at all surprised if this excellent poem is a winner. Kindest regards, my friend. :) Evelyn
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 3:54 PM
well, gosh, I hope he shows up for the wedding!! That would make everything the frosting on the cake. Great imagination you used for this particular contest, Alexis.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 1:53 PM
Lovely! Love it. a graceful write... God bless you. Love, Gina
Pandit Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Mesmerizing poetry my friend. Delightful story of parental love, Alexis. Her father always loved her--now she knows. A sure win for you.
Evans Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Oh! So beautiful, Alexis. Remarkable!!
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May 24, 2021 at 12:24 PM
A Superb write Alexis, it was the best I have seen today, and you hit the jackpot with this poem; I can see a high placement in the contest, and I wish you a stroke of excellent luck.
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