Connie Pachecho Poet Limerick

He Found His Love In Deep Water

he found his love in deep water


there she was a roasted beauty queen lying on the beach
he moved towards her, inch by inch and then he met her reach
she came out of her shell
and that broke the spell
perfect, she was a hermit too living on rock bottom's breach

connie pachecho

3/11/17

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James Marshall Goff May 5, 2017 at 8:05 AM A poem of love & renewel...reinventing oneself...I do it everyday...great poem, Connie...yes, a hermit living on rock bottom's breach...I find myself lured there....fight it...and seek a higher plane of conscientious...coming far short...but much better for the effort! jim