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He Found His Love In Deep Water

he found his love in deep water there she was a roasted beauty queen lying on the beach he moved towards her, inch by inch and then he met her reach she came out of her shell and that broke the spell perfect, she was a hermit too living on rock bottom's breach connie pachecho 3/11/17

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Date: 5/5/2017 8:05:00 AM
A poem of love & renewel...reinventing oneself...I do it everyday...great poem, Connie...yes, a hermit living on rock bottom's breach...I find myself lured there....fight it...and seek a higher plane of conscientious...coming far short...but much better for the effort! jim
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