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He Closed the Door and I Made a New Way

The world where I belonged to, I closed my eyes. I planned a journey to His place, a decision wise. A road I travelled, with my virtues and goodwill. Acceptance to the new world, and a struggle to uphill. This is not where I belong to, still I made my way to His vicinity. Neither a word of silence even, Nor a sign of life in that 'hassle city' . I sweat, I lose my breath, I hardly have any strength left. I never complain, I never cry, And I still don't feel like being bereft. At last, my real journey commenced, And I found a sign board saying "HEAVEN" But the Witty Master up there had other plans, My soul smiled at Him as He said "It's not that easy one." He glanced at me and closed the door, since He had nothing much left to say. Grew up praising Him in the other world as I was, I remembered His lessons, and made a new way !!

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Date: 2/20/2016 10:42:00 PM
chhavi gandhi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 7:46:00 PM
Chhavi :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 10/27/2014 8:20:00 AM
It's sad to live so, keep writing it helps to know people are listening. Light & Love
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