He can only hope

He looks through hospital doors.
The sun the sky the trees await.
He releases a deep breath.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Nature in harmony with Humanity sufferings.. Nature echoes the turmoil of the heart and mind.. it is a genuine reflection of our souls.. Nature is happy when we are dipped into bliss.. May your "nature release" bliss Line. Stay blessed always.
Gauthier Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, Besma, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 3:04 AM
I can relate big time Line, thinking of you:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 2:20 AM
I can relate to this haiku in a very deep way, Line. I cannot talk about it yet, but it calls to me.
Gauthier Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Thanks for sharing, Caren.
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