He Became the Man She Saw

He had lots of faults
She loved him with her full heart
Overlooked them all
This surprised and amazed him
He rapidly changed
Becoming the man she saw
Stepping into his best self
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 10:24 PM
Awesome, Caren. Beautiful.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Thank you Line. I see this all the time. Where a man who is a "secret" to thousands of others suddenly meets the right woman and voila! Superman.
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