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He Ate Like a Horse

Little Teddy was so awfully thin His poor legs were no wider than a pin He ate six meals a day Straw, barley, oats and hay Indigestion made his stomach cave in

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Date: 11/19/2019 9:48:00 PM
G'day Gershon … that hay will get you every time. Good one Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 10:05:00 PM
Hey, hay, Lindsay! That hay will get you every time! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 11/19/2019 8:46:00 AM
You are missing a couple of “I”s hs poor legs and cave n. I’m not sure if it’s on purpose. I do agree, poor Teddy indeed. ;0)
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Date: 11/19/2019 9:04:00 AM
You're certainly right about the i's.. I've been having a problem with my keyboard, and don't always catch the missing 'i's. Just fixed it... Thanks for having my back Richard! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/19/2019 8:16:00 AM
Rough way to go for a skinny legged horse! (How often I say that!)...Good one my friend!.......pat
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Date: 11/19/2019 9:03:00 AM
---And you should see how skinny this horse's arms are! LOL. Thanks, Pat. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/19/2019 7:05:00 AM
Stop horsing around Gershon. : ) Nice one my friend
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 9:02:00 AM
Heh, heh. Just can't stop, for some reason. ~ Mr. Ed
Date: 11/19/2019 2:22:00 AM
Hi Gershon. Nice and funny Limerick. well done. Thanks for sharing
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank YOU for the support, Gregory! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/18/2019 10:11:00 PM
I agree with Line... poor Teddy. Bless you, Gina
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Date: 11/18/2019 9:05:00 PM
Poor Teddy! It's rough life being a scrawny horse I bet.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 9:00:00 AM
Almost as rough as being the 'Tawny Scrawny Lion!' (Little Golden Books story)! Thanks, Line! :) gw

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