He and I

He happened to me like an autumn
Just like the change of leaves
It was sudden
But it was raining, raining on that day
Raining with black umbrellas and hurried footsteps
With wet papers and cold classrooms
Then, just right then
I heard a shrieky little laugh
Just a glance and I was caught
Caught in a whirlpool of warm chocolate
And there, just right there
Was where I met my Peter Pan

To me
He was a bouquet of sweet herbs
Sprigs of parsley crossed by bay leaves
Topped by thymes and wrapped in sage
Fragranced by mint
And colored by lavender 
He was… all the good old nature

To me
He was a puzzle book 
Filled with ancient spells
And wondrous casts
Rested on the shelf of red mahogany wood
Dusted in ignorance
Waiting to be learned

To me
He was a drop of sunshine on the window pane
A slip of moonlight through the crack door
The first morning dew and evening stroll
The summer breeze and the night air

To him
I was a blank page
A passerby ring
Snow in the summer
And a midnight dawn

One day
I swore
I’d knock his guard and ask him out
Yes I swore on that one day
That had passed long ago
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 25, 2014 at 9:07 AM
thank you for the comment on my comment...PD
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November 10, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations!!! IL AS --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <
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May 24, 2014 at 4:31 AM
thank you :)
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November 6, 2013 at 9:09 PM
Congratulations..... Love ~~SKAT~~
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November 7, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Thank you very much :)
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November 5, 2013 at 11:24 PM
IL, Congratulations on your win... awesome Teenager Entertainment poem.... always~ LINDA
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November 6, 2013 at 7:36 PM
Thank you very much :)
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November 2, 2013 at 6:52 AM
nicely crafted poem...congrats on your win :)
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November 2, 2013 at 8:01 AM
thank you very much :)
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November 1, 2013 at 10:19 PM
Congrats on ur win beautifully written.
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November 2, 2013 at 3:20 AM
Thank you very much. But congrats on my win? Did i win something? :D
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November 1, 2013 at 5:11 PM
Most excellent you got real talent my friend! Lovely metaphors just lovely...Congrad's Light & Love
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November 2, 2013 at 3:20 AM
Thank you very much :)
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October 28, 2013 at 4:14 PM
IL.. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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October 29, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Thank you very much :) . About myself is not so much interesting.. I just want to learn proper poetry as I don't understand about meters and the types. Happy to have found the site as this is very helpful :) hugs*
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October 28, 2013 at 5:09 AM
hi, IL AS, , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 28, 2013 at 9:20 AM
Thank you very much. :)
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October 28, 2013 at 3:51 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, IL ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 28, 2013 at 9:21 AM
Thank you very much :)
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