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He and I

He happened to me like an autumn Just like the change of leaves It was sudden But it was raining, raining on that day Raining with black umbrellas and hurried footsteps With wet papers and cold classrooms Then, just right then I heard a shrieky little laugh Just a glance and I was caught Caught in a whirlpool of warm chocolate And there, just right there Was where I met my Peter Pan To me He was a bouquet of sweet herbs Sprigs of parsley crossed by bay leaves Topped by thymes and wrapped in sage Fragranced by mint And colored by lavender He was… all the good old nature To me He was a puzzle book Filled with ancient spells And wondrous casts Rested on the shelf of red mahogany wood Dusted in ignorance Waiting to be learned To me He was a drop of sunshine on the window pane A slip of moonlight through the crack door The first morning dew and evening stroll The summer breeze and the night air To him I was a blank page A passerby ring Snow in the summer And a midnight dawn One day I swore I’d knock his guard and ask him out Yes I swore on that one day That had passed long ago

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Date: 5/25/2014 9:07:00 AM
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Date: 11/10/2013 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations!!! IL AS --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <
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Date: 5/24/2014 4:31:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 11/6/2013 9:09:00 PM
Congratulations..... Love ~~SKAT~~
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Date: 11/7/2013 10:33:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 11/5/2013 11:24:00 PM
IL, Congratulations on your win... awesome Teenager Entertainment poem.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:36:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 11/2/2013 6:52:00 AM
nicely crafted poem...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/2/2013 8:01:00 AM
thank you very much :)
Date: 11/1/2013 10:19:00 PM
Congrats on ur win beautifully written.
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Date: 11/2/2013 3:20:00 AM
Thank you very much. But congrats on my win? Did i win something? :D
Date: 11/1/2013 5:11:00 PM
Most excellent you got real talent my friend! Lovely metaphors just lovely...Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 11/2/2013 3:20:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 10/28/2013 4:14:00 PM
IL.. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/29/2013 7:41:00 AM
Thank you very much :) . About myself is not so much interesting.. I just want to learn proper poetry as I don't understand about meters and the types. Happy to have found the site as this is very helpful :) hugs*
Date: 10/28/2013 5:09:00 AM
hi, IL AS, , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:20:00 AM
Thank you very much. :)
Date: 10/28/2013 3:51:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, IL ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:21:00 AM
Thank you very much :)

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