He and Horizon

In some distant valley,on a mountain's peak
     Sat a girl with arms around her knees
     Had anyone ever seen her so petrified?
     Something he provoked seemed to die

     She stared at horizon,shuddered in cold
     Her heart was so tired and grown too old
     One after another,she dropped a tear
     Her soul was screaming but he couldn't hear

     Then for once,she admired the settling sky;
     The dark and distressed clouds just moved by
     It was so lovely,so beautiful to be cleared;
     Imprisoned by her thoughts,she too wished to be spared

     The orange,the blues had mingled into one soul,
     So many delights made the horizon whole
     The unknown territories had mixed into a blessing
     But moon and stars were the only one messing

     She loathed the sight of night covering by
     Her heart and horizon were still in a dive
     She needed light to think,to reveal
     The presence of love might let her heal

     The horizon decided to end this show,
     It took her breath away to see it go
     The horizon had stolen away her answers
     And moon and stars were the only left dancers

     She stared at the sky and the moon shined in her face,
     It was so bright and elated,it beheld her beloved's grace
     The moon was the only one watching her cry:
     Should she give up and let her feelings die?

     The moon seemed infuriated at her strange thoughts,
     Clouds had came in and moon had refuge sought
     She felt dejected,neglected and pained;
     It reminded her of her beloved who nearly did the same

     She had been abandoned as if she's lied
     And then she was told that no explanations were required
     No answers to questions;Did he love her or not?
     Just at that moment moon had subject bought

     Shining at her face,it told her a story
     The clouds have moved away as if it was her glory:
     "Wait my love until I reach the skies,
     Keep your love strong and don't let it die"
 
     "Dreams and victories are not made of clay;
     They don't serve you success in some golden tray"
     It was the voice of her love,she knew by heart
     Without any horizon,she now knew where to start

     Even if earth turns black and blue,
     She would love him with a heart very true
     Nothing would set them apart,
     Because even the distant moon's light never dart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/3/2013 12:55:00 AM
You rocked :)
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Date: 9/28/2013 12:31:00 PM
wow.. the journey, and imagery... from you.. AMAZING....beautiful story, on how love is kept strong ... always~ LINDA
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Date: 9/27/2013 1:01:00 PM
A shining gem!
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Sidra Firdous
Date: 9/28/2013 11:31:00 AM
Thanks :D
Date: 9/19/2013 1:22:00 PM
:') This is such a very Very beautiful poem that you have written. I swear, It made me cry! :) You have put such deep emotion into this poem, It is truly amazing. Like I have said: It is so very, very beautiful indeed. I hope you get your love back :) if this poem is about you, Sidra. This deserves a 10 as a rating, but sadly, it won't let me rate it that high. I am favoring this masterpiece. :) ~Destiny
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Sidra Firdous
Date: 9/19/2013 1:34:00 PM
I cried myself while writing it I didn't know I had this me,,I lost my ability to speak directly to someone..No one..Almost no one can understand what its like being caged by your own emotions.Thanks a lot for appreciation Jordan. :)
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