He

He takes my body
And Rocks me softly 
He calls me names 
And Gives me pain 
He brings me romance 
And places kisses 
He says I'm dumb
And says I have no brain 
He hugs me 
And gives me love 
He abuses me
And accuses me
He brings me flowers 
And takes me to many places 
He stomps on me
And cuts me in pieces 
He cuses 
And he fuses 
He says my name sweetly 
And then he gives me pleasure 
He shouts at me 
And gives me bruises 
He talks so passionately 
And fills me with ecstasy
He fights with me 
And presses his fist inside of me
He's so full of anger 
And filled with hate 
He will fall one day 
And it will all be too late
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:19:00 AM
Reny Jameel, well done. SKAT
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Date: 3/30/2016 2:08:00 AM
thank u
Date: 3/25/2016 6:25:00 AM
This is a deep and awesome free verse poem, Reny.... Linda
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Date: 3/30/2016 2:07:00 AM
thanks im not yet too familiar with the poetry types:)
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