Haze In Singapore

I went to Singapore last week
I can smell something like smoke everywhere
and actually there was a forest fire at Indonesia
which is a neighboring country on a big island

My friend told me to wear a mask to avoid HAZE
no wonder I saw so many people wearing mask
I was scared at the first but maybe it is not that dangerous
so I calmed down a little bit and ate my lunch

I went to my hotel to check in
and I went to my room and I saw outside the window 
and it was really smokey everywhere
so I went nearby shopping mall and shopped for awhile

After that I went to eat my dinner at a food court
and hang out a little bit with my friends in the arcade
when I went out it really smell even though I wore my mask
I went back to my room and I slept early because of the smell 

I woke up and the haze got really serious it shocked me
my friend said that we can't go to Universal Studios theme park today
I was kind of upset because I waited for this day really long
but he said that we can go tomorrow then I waited for tomorrow

When I woke up it was RAINING what the heck was wrong with my LUCK?
then the rain stopped and my friend told me WE CAN GO!!!!
yes finally and I was really happy
We went to Universal Studios and we had fun

Then it was time to go back to California
when I went back something smelled
it smelled like smoke everyone wore masks and it was smokey
OMG!!!!!!The End
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/4/2024 6:33:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/26/2016 5:35:00 PM
Athen Wong, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:00:00 PM
Athen, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 6/26/2013 9:32:00 AM
this was very suspenseful, and the way you ended it was cool, enjoyed your write ~always, Linda
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