Haywire Love

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For Bite Size Contest No111 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

When love is smooth and runs in tune, young couples gaze up at the moon, but before or when they hit the sack, love sometimes goes out of whack. So, take care when you play with fire, that love does not go all haywire.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/25/2025 4:47:00 AM

Hello David, how clever, rhythmic reminder that love, though dreamy, can spark and swerve when least expected! Witty, wise, and wonderfully crafted. Great truth and charm! Winter Blessings, my Friend, Daniel

David Crandall
Date: 2/25/2025 10:18:00 AM

Thanks Daniel! I wrote a goofy poem called "True Love's Dilemma" and I liked the phraseology of Hilda's comment on that, which inspired me to write this poem.