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Human hands and hawks have worked well together Five thousand year record for falconry An eternal bond of flesh and feather Shows us how epic hawk hunting can be As raptors light upon a gloved fist Freed from handler's hoods hawks wing on high See this dim lit tale through thicket and mist Think how hawks think in the chase as they fly These predators soar into human hearts Seek nature's balance between bird and prey Fiercely their talons grasp the killing arts Pouncing and crushing victims every way Returns to the glove are acts to behold By the hands of man see nature unfold 105 words Sonnet 14 lines Colored Pencil illustration by G. Gaul

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Date: 11/23/2024 10:39:00 AM
Greg! So good to see you posting again with your always thought full and perceptive poems spoken with your eloquent style! The ancient art of falconry and the relationship between man and bird is wonderfully expressed! Your artwork is superb - another one of your many talents on display! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of Thanksgiving joy to you!
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Date: 11/17/2024 10:48:00 AM
WOW!!! What a lovely write with great picture. Love Both... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/22/2024 10:21:00 AM
Paula, your warm and candid commentary always fills me with pleasure. Best to you too.
Date: 11/17/2024 9:11:00 AM
Dear Greg, my inspiring poet friend, indeed, your amazing sonnet captures the energy, heart and spirit of falconry, both on the wing and “upon the gloved fist.” Your beautiful, dramatic pencil illustration further enhances the relationship between falcon and falconer. Splendid artistic details in both verse and art. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/22/2024 10:19:00 AM
So kind of you to comment Susan. Always fills me with confidence that I'm on the right path. As you know, poets easily fall prey to delusions of all kinds. I appreciate your taking so much time with my scribbles.

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