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Hawking Hands

Human hands and hawks have worked well together
Five thousand year record for falconry
An eternal bond of flesh and feather
Shows us how epic hawk hunting can be

As raptors light upon a gloved fist
Freed from handler's hoods hawks wing on high
See this dim lit tale through thicket and mist
Think how hawks think in the chase as they fly

These predators soar into human hearts
Seek nature's balance between bird and prey
Fiercely their talons grasp the killing arts
Pouncing and crushing victims every way

Returns to the glove are acts to behold
By the hands of man see nature unfold




105 words  Sonnet   14 lines
Colored Pencil illustration by G. Gaul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kauffman Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Greg! So good to see you posting again with your always thought full and perceptive poems spoken with your eloquent style! The ancient art of falconry and the relationship between man and bird is wonderfully expressed! Your artwork is superb - another one of your many talents on display! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of Thanksgiving joy to you!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 10:48 AM
WOW!!! What a lovely write with great picture. Love Both... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Gaul Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Paula, your warm and candid commentary always fills me with pleasure. Best to you too.
Ashley Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Dear Greg, my inspiring poet friend, indeed, your amazing sonnet captures the energy, heart and spirit of falconry, both on the wing and “upon the gloved fist.” Your beautiful, dramatic pencil illustration further enhances the relationship between falcon and falconer. Splendid artistic details in both verse and art. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gaul Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 10:19 AM
So kind of you to comment Susan. Always fills me with confidence that I'm on the right path. As you know, poets easily fall prey to delusions of all kinds. I appreciate your taking so much time with my scribbles.
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