Hawk

the hawk, flapping wings flew in front of the windshield a sight magnified Heidi Sands 6/3/18

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Date: 6/5/2018 3:20:00 AM

A magnificent capture of a sight. Brilliant haiku Heidi! A pleasure to read! Stay safe.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2018 9:12:00 AM

Thank you Besma :)

Date: 6/4/2018 10:41:00 AM

I can just see you face to face with a magnified hawk! Very good haiku.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 10:58:00 AM

It was so neat sunlite! Thank you :)

Date: 6/4/2018 7:08:00 AM

Impressive Haiku dear, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios :)

Date: 6/3/2018 10:27:00 PM

Heidi, you captured the startling beauty of your close encounter with a hawk so wonderfully. A lovely haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Susan. It was probably the closest I have ever been to a hawk :)

Date: 6/3/2018 8:56:00 PM

I. Love this one Heidi! I have an affinity for the hawks <3 xomo!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Maureen. I am happy to hear you love this one! :) It was a beautiful sight!

Date: 6/3/2018 2:14:00 PM

wonderful imagery Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/3/2018 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Jan! It was so neat to see. It flew right in front of me, when I was driving :)