Hawk

the hawk, flapping wings
           flew in front of the windshield
                   a sight magnified

Heidi Sands

6/3/18

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Besma Riabi Dziri

June 5, 2018 at 3:20 AM

A magnificent capture of a sight. Brilliant haiku Heidi! A pleasure to read! Stay safe.

Heidi Sands

June 5, 2018 at 9:12 AM

Thank you Besma :)

Sunlite Wanter

June 4, 2018 at 10:41 AM

I can just see you face to face with a magnified hawk! Very good haiku.

Heidi Sands

June 4, 2018 at 10:58 AM

It was so neat sunlite! Thank you :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 4, 2018 at 7:08 AM

Impressive Haiku dear, Heidi!

Heidi Sands

June 4, 2018 at 7:18 AM

Thank you Demetrios :)

Susan Ashley

June 3, 2018 at 10:27 PM

Heidi, you captured the startling beauty of your close encounter with a hawk so wonderfully. A lovely haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands

June 4, 2018 at 7:18 AM

Thank you Susan. It was probably the closest I have ever been to a hawk :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 3, 2018 at 8:56 PM

I. Love this one Heidi! I have an affinity for the hawks <3 xomo!

Heidi Sands

June 4, 2018 at 7:18 AM

Thank you Maureen. I am happy to hear you love this one! :) It was a beautiful sight!

Jan Allison

June 3, 2018 at 2:14 PM

wonderful imagery Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

June 3, 2018 at 2:25 PM

Thank you Jan! It was so neat to see. It flew right in front of me, when I was driving :)

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