Hawaiian Tropic of Cancer

With visual field microscopic
Some utterly blind and myopic
Consume to the max
As a luxury tax 
On those needing help philanthropic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 6:47 PM
I keep searching around and can't find one I have not seen! It was nice seeing this one again. Let me check out your very BEST
Beaufort Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 5:13 AM
Unfortunately, my job is consuming my creative energy. Otherwise, I would write more. It's more enjoyable to be here and put together something, but I still need the paycheck.
Duncan Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 1:39 AM
I do love going to the Art gallery ;} along with Andy warhol ;} thank you for reading my Belladonna ;}
Beaufort Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 9:21 AM
Hope you are well. Your poems and wisdom are here for the taking. Be well and not a stranger!
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 11:34 PM
SO TRUE< I really enjoyed this one! good seeing you here today.
Beaufort Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 9:16 AM
It's always a pleasure hearing from you and reading your poems. You are a master!
Breidenthal Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 2:09 PM
Great one, Duke. It's a crazy world. We've gottah be careful. Hope you are having a great fall season so far.
Beaufort Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 9:03 AM
If the world was crazy in 2013, then I wonder what it is now? We have a Nordstrom near us. I was dragged there yesterday because someone gave my wife a $25 gift certificate. I looked for Ivanka dresses, but I couldn't find any. I feel terrible for the immigrants whose families are being and about to be shattered. This is the inequality in the country starting to play out. Rather than fix the problem, we are going to pick on certain groups. Anyway, I rant. But I wish you success in 2017 and beyond.
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September 3, 2013 at 11:11 AM
Hi Duke, I have a picture where I am standing in front of one of the marks of the Tropic of Cancer.. some splits are for the best... enjoyed the stopping by..LINDA
Beaufort Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 8:52 AM
You must have traveled somewhere just a little south of where you are. Mexico perhaps? If you ever travel to NY, let us know. We would like to meet you for lunch or give you a ride from the airport. You have one of the finest poetic minds in the universe. You make such interesting connections. I hope you are well. I am sending out good vibrations to you.
Mohammed Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 6:12 PM
I had to do some research on two of the words used Duke. Well crafted! Wishing you and your family a great weekend ahead.
Beaufort Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Happy Valentine's Day, sir!! There will be a lot of poetry here on that subject since love is a major topic here.
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August 27, 2013 at 8:13 AM
- Well thought out and well written Duke. - Hope all is good with you. -Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Beaufort Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 8:34 AM
I try! You have crossed a threshold of some kind in your writing. It is fantastic.
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