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Hawaiian Dream

MOE’UHANE — DON’T WAKE ME UP

            plumeria pink
        mokolil’i island blue
     white sand secret beach
    warm tropical salty winds
bare feet sink deeply in dream

               7/23/2020

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Suzanne Delaney

July 27, 2020 at 5:41 AM

Beautiful Kim: Took me right back to my days in Hawaii. Mahalo, SuZ

Kim Rodrigues

July 27, 2020 at 1:58 PM

Mahalo <3

Andrea Dietrich

July 24, 2020 at 3:22 PM

this is a beauty. What is up with Hawaiian poetry now? I want to go see the death one now

Kim Rodrigues

July 24, 2020 at 3:47 PM

LOL! Caren Krutsinger wrote one and put me in the island mood. After all, we can’t go much of anywhere. <3 Kim

Kenneth Cheney

July 24, 2020 at 6:21 AM

I'm dreaming along. An inspiration.

Kim Rodrigues

July 24, 2020 at 10:00 AM

:) Kenneth!

Caren Krutsinger

July 23, 2020 at 7:24 PM

Your imagery was fantastic.

Kim Rodrigues

July 23, 2020 at 8:47 PM

Thank you and so much for reading my poems today!

Gershon Wolf

July 23, 2020 at 5:30 PM

Like that 'mokolil'i island blue' especially... Just edges out that plumeria pink... I feel like I should be seeing Ricardo Montalban any second, drink in hand, calling out: "Welcome to Fantasy Island." Great imagery, my friend! Peace and Light, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

July 23, 2020 at 7:08 PM

Love your added imagery....da plane...da plane!