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Hawai'i Nei

Wahine hula dance all night Swivelling hips beneath moonlight But comes the dawn Bikini on They surf the waves like dynamite!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/22/2019 12:45:00 PM
I love this Rico! I am faving it! : ) xxoo
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/22/2019 3:05:00 PM
I had you in mind! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/21/2019 9:57:00 PM
Love it Rico. I'm there, well here, dancing by myself :) xomo!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/22/2019 3:05:00 PM
See? Life can be beautiful! Aloha! Rico