Hawaii

Caren, whose poetry sings with grand plumage,
swims with bouquets of flowers and such. You
inspire me! And aloha to William :)

HAWAII

Bird of paradise, plumeria, jasmine,
orchids, gardenia, hibiscus, primrose.
Aloha sea — paradise welcomes thee.
Cup of gold, elephant’s ear, fuchsia and firecrackers.
Lantana, glory bush, pineapple and Waikiki.
Queen Emma lily, prickly pear, silversword and sugarcane.
Hawaii islands erupting with ecstasies —
scents that rise the temperature, hues that squeal with desire,
cascading sounds of God’s mirth, adventure on steroids.
Come in, ebb and flow in dugout boats - leis floating
upon the deep-blue skies. Your hearts are pounding drums.
Don’t be shy. Grab this shelf of paradise. Don’t let go.
Aloha friends! Let’s all be friends. Planes fly in.
Koa, coconut, ‘ohi’ a lehua, candlenut, monkeypod,
noni, and lemon-scented gum. Mahalo nui!*
O’ahu, Maui, Kaua’i, Big, Lana’i and Moloka’i —
find your serenity, your northern shore, the allure
of life. Grab yourself a blue hawaii, piña colada,
mai tai, mimosa. Fill your cups with Eden’s fruit.

8/19/2020

*thank you very much ma-hah-lo-noo-ee)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 8/22/2020 9:00:00 PM
Ahh! "Sweet Leimomi, heavenly flowers...", sways my heart joyfully, Kim, a precious write my phonetic one, very articulative throughout for I am genuinely thrilled, stay well my friend and of course, Ah-LOW-ha! William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2020 11:21:00 AM
Mahalo nui! Aloha, my friend! :)
Date: 8/21/2020 9:35:00 AM
Wow feel you took me on a trip to Hawaii - for sure 'Fill your cups with Edens fruit - so well penned my friend. Breathtaking! Blessings and hugs, Jenn.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 11:37:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 8/20/2020 5:08:00 PM
"Mr Roarke, Boss, De plane, de plane." 'Yes, ahem, And Welcome to Fantasy Island! Smiles, everyone, Smiles.' ~ Fresh off the 'Love Boat,' :) Gavin McLeod
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 6:44:00 PM
Great show, in its time! Aloha!
Date: 8/20/2020 4:00:00 PM
I am enthusiastic that I have inspired you Kim. I am thrilled! This i s so beautiful! It makes me want to get on a plane and fly to Hawaii immediately, and believe it or not I was there once and did not like it much. But now you have changed that for me. This is incredibly enticing and makes Hawaii sound like FUN!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 6:43:00 PM
I was in my 20's with little kids. We loved boogie boarding at the beaches, driving around the island...seeing the North Shore. Watching people leap from a beautiful waterfall, free luau, sweetest pineapple, celebrating with leis, etc..
Date: 8/20/2020 12:16:00 AM
Your poem, certainly fills my cup, Kim, truly a beautiful place to be...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 5:36:00 AM
I was blessed to live there for 3 years when I was in the Navy.
Date: 8/19/2020 4:21:00 PM
Hello Kim, just by reading this poem makes me want to go there. it sound like a peaceful place. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/21/2020 11:12:00 AM
HelooKim, You are welcom Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2020 5:06:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene! Hugs!
Date: 8/19/2020 11:55:00 AM
Sounds an amazing place Kim, you've given us a taste of it. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2020 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 8/19/2020 8:23:00 AM
I have really enjoyed visiting Hawaii and really enjoyed your poem. Thanks for writing it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2020 8:36:00 AM
Thank you, Kenneth! We dream...we dream!
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