Hawaii

Caren, whose poetry sings with grand plumage,
swims with bouquets of flowers and such. You
inspire me! And aloha to William :)

HAWAII

Bird of paradise, plumeria, jasmine,
orchids, gardenia, hibiscus, primrose.
Aloha sea — paradise welcomes thee.
Cup of gold, elephant’s ear, fuchsia and firecrackers.
Lantana, glory bush, pineapple and Waikiki.
Queen Emma lily, prickly pear, silversword and sugarcane.
Hawaii islands erupting with ecstasies —
scents that rise the temperature, hues that squeal with desire,
cascading sounds of God’s mirth, adventure on steroids.
Come in, ebb and flow in dugout boats - leis floating
upon the deep-blue skies. Your hearts are pounding drums.
Don’t be shy. Grab this shelf of paradise. Don’t let go.
Aloha friends! Let’s all be friends. Planes fly in.
Koa, coconut, ‘ohi’ a lehua, candlenut, monkeypod,
noni, and lemon-scented gum. Mahalo nui!*
O’ahu, Maui, Kaua’i, Big, Lana’i and Moloka’i —
find your serenity, your northern shore, the allure
of life. Grab yourself a blue hawaii, piña colada,
mai tai, mimosa. Fill your cups with Eden’s fruit.

8/19/2020

*thank you very much ma-hah-lo-noo-ee)
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:00 PM
Ahh! "Sweet Leimomi, heavenly flowers...", sways my heart joyfully, Kim, a precious write my phonetic one, very articulative throughout for I am genuinely thrilled, stay well my friend and of course, Ah-LOW-ha! William
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 11:21 AM
Mahalo nui! Aloha, my friend! :)
Proxenos Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Wow feel you took me on a trip to Hawaii - for sure 'Fill your cups with Edens fruit - so well penned my friend. Breathtaking! Blessings and hugs, Jenn.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 11:37 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Wolf Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:08 PM
"Mr Roarke, Boss, De plane, de plane." 'Yes, ahem, And Welcome to Fantasy Island! Smiles, everyone, Smiles.' ~ Fresh off the 'Love Boat,' :) Gavin McLeod
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 6:44 PM
Great show, in its time! Aloha!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 4:00 PM
I am enthusiastic that I have inspired you Kim. I am thrilled! This i s so beautiful! It makes me want to get on a plane and fly to Hawaii immediately, and believe it or not I was there once and did not like it much. But now you have changed that for me. This is incredibly enticing and makes Hawaii sound like FUN!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 6:43 PM
I was in my 20's with little kids. We loved boogie boarding at the beaches, driving around the island...seeing the North Shore. Watching people leap from a beautiful waterfall, free luau, sweetest pineapple, celebrating with leis, etc..
Horsman Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 12:16 AM
Your poem, certainly fills my cup, Kim, truly a beautiful place to be...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:36 AM
I was blessed to live there for 3 years when I was in the Navy.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Hello Kim, just by reading this poem makes me want to go there. it sound like a peaceful place. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 11:12 AM
HelooKim, You are welcom Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 5:06 PM
Thank you, Darlene! Hugs!
Cunningham Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 11:55 AM
Sounds an amazing place Kim, you've given us a taste of it. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Cheney Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 8:23 AM
I have really enjoyed visiting Hawaii and really enjoyed your poem. Thanks for writing it.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Thank you, Kenneth! We dream...we dream!
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