Having Left You

Now my head is free
wrong to right please let it be.
To love you again.

© Harry J Horsman  2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 5:42 PM
and this adorable senryu as well. I have many other faves, but gotta get back to work now!!
K. Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 3:09 AM
wow-- this sure is moving Harry-- so much emotion in these 3 lines---and that last line just grabs the heart... nikko :)
Joseph Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 1:50 PM
lovely and emotional, made me tear right up....
Henderson Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 8:40 PM
very good true to life visual, harry. I LOVE good senryu and haiku. Charles
Devonshire Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 7:53 PM
Harry, just wanted you to know how much your comments mean to me. Thanks so much! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 7:45 PM
enjoyed reading today, thanks for your comments on my work!!
R Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Sweet wish..to love again...Great write, Harry. If it's for the contest good luck! Emily
A   Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 11:56 PM
Comment your poem already.. Ty for the lovely comments Harry,..p.d.
Knop Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 4:49 AM
Well written, Harry!...I had few troubles with my eyes and could not spent time at my computer but now it's ok again...All the best!...Gert
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 2:34 AM
How beautiful this senryu is Harry. Thanks so much for commenting on my acrostic. Sydney was a second home for a few years and I miss it. Aloha, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 8:59 PM
a fav
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 8:59 PM
oh, I love this, harry. Is it for that one contest? I hope so! Luv, Andrea
A  Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 7:09 PM
WELCOME TO LOVE*SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Good job in this one..Hope that the love is true and lifetime warranty...Sara
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Harry and the best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 9:17 AM
Such a heartfelt senryu, Harry. If it is meant to be, this love will be restored to your life. Sometimes we have to leave behind those who don't return our affection. It's sad if you are going through this right now, dear. You seem to have such a loving, kind heart. Love, Carolyn
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August 13, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Wonderful Senryu Harry.. regrets we all hve like this .. but we move forward.. good luck in the contest.. enjoyed and happy weekend..with luv..
Neels Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 5:31 AM
Hopeful write Harry, hope you are having a great day, Wilma
A   Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 12:13 AM
Enjoyed Harry,..p.d.
Smith Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 12:07 AM
Emotional write my friend.
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