Haven

I felt home
In its presence I felt warm & home
With no contact, I feel touched by just staring
Distance meant nothing  for if I could see I could feel
Its light made our nights as we lay calm watching the moon's revolves
While mama tells a story of its uniqueness till we fall asleep

 *TheWriter'sWriting*

My Haven 
Ransacking the celestial bodies 
None could be a match 
The geoid shaped always have my attention 
Its an art entailing artist 
It was awe inspiring 
 @AmazingPen

I felt home
Patience & commitment is a needed mama advice
You can't see what it entails clearly without paying attention 
So, we would lay quietly listening to mama stories as it leaves us in amusement  
 For what we saw was far more than our imaginations; it was a gift
Sometimes it was a woman carrying her child while cooking, other times it was children playing

 *TheWriter'sWriting*

My Haven 
Beautiful sunlight 
The breeze of clapping seas
 Dancing around in wavy form
Swaying of trees in unison
Never did I know of the sadness its bringing to my feet

@AmazingPen

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June 11, 2020 at 4:39 AM
your heaven is delightful heaver where grief of live never gripes you...........superb poem shared; enjoyable
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