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To see the world in black and white And to know right and wrong To never wonder about what might Or what is to take so long To fly the way the wind blows And always go the right way To seek what the world knows And transfers on this day To strive to accomplish the lone task With authority, simply and surely Only see one stone ahead But study that stone purely To see black and to see white And to know which shows the way Even if you don’t think your candle is bright At least you’ve had your say

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Date: 6/13/2023 12:42:00 PM
very cool poem and the way you incorporated the bolded line!
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Andy Chunn
Date: 6/28/2023 2:22:00 PM
Thanks Andrea....most appreciated!
Date: 6/11/2023 5:27:00 PM
This is great. Very though provoking...its as if the poem is thinking it through as it goes on.
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Andy Chunn
Date: 6/28/2023 2:22:00 PM
I appreciate your feedback David. Thanks for reading my poem.
Date: 6/11/2023 5:04:00 PM
Nice poem. Good luck.
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Andy Chunn
Date: 6/28/2023 2:22:00 PM
Thank you Jay...best to you.

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