Have You Ever Been Made To Feel

Have you ever been made to feel ???

That you are a ghost, the invisible man, while within a group.
Do you find some stepping on your ideas?, walking on your words?,
ignoring your attempts to contribute to the conversation???

Did it start in childhood, children are to be seen, not heard?
Carried into a school system where individuality was stifled.
Then into adulthood, on the job, a sheep among the flock.

Do as I say, not as I do, you may know more but I am the boss.
Your thoughts, your ideas, your feelings withering on the vine,
 bearing not but stagnant, rotting, fruitless words, ideas, feelings.  

For some, not interested in hearing, not interested in listening
 to what you have to say, to contribute, your words suppressed, 
silenced by those egos who pounce upon the subject, your words

leaving their pray dangling upon a rope, noose around your essence, strangling the life out of your words, your ideas, feelings, your soul. 
If so, fear not!, their ignorance, their egos, they have to live with.

B. J. “A” 2
May 10th, 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/24/2023 3:41:00 PM
Hello William J.Jr. Artfield, when there is a gathering and a conversation going on, I have a hard time to jump in and ask question Or add my thoughts. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/5/2023 3:48:00 PM
I gather that you have a hard time to ask questions. I think if you really want to know something-just ask. It is up to the person to answer the question or not. All you have to do is ask. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 12/5/2023 3:44:00 PM
William J.Jr. Attfield, to answer your question: Yes Poetry soup has helped me to overcome a hurt feeling i had with my dead husband. All it took was reading a pom from one of the poets to heal me. Poetry does heal when you read the right poem. Enjoy your evenikng my friend. /Darlene/
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