Have You?

have you ever?
i mean ever?
with somebody you just met
just touched for the first time
just licked
like a lime twist
in yo ghetto blues sunshine
i mean really

have you ever?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 10:54 AM
do we kiss and tell? A great flow of words, love the line just licked like a lime twist, great stuff Brian!
Wood Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 4:10 PM
Excellent and blush worthy.
Crane Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Provocative Exciting Flirtatious Youthful Yes, I like this. And I can’t help but wonder…have you ever?
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