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Have you ever loved so hotly that a flaming sword couldn’t bleed you? Couldn’t burn away one infinitesimal strand? Have you ever wanted so much that swallowing all the stars from heaven would leave you aching with thirst? Have you ever needed so much that you’d soar cold frozen naked to the dark shadows of bleak Neptune and die over and over again? Have you ever desired so much that your body trembles and quakes shivers and shakes planets from galaxies? I have I do every single moment this love swallows me whole until I become its very essence substance effect.

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Date: 1/23/2021 3:36:00 AM
You have such a way with words; you are an amazing wordsmith! "you’d soar cold frozen naked to the dark shadows of bleak Neptune and die over and over again?" Every part of this is a wow.
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Date: 1/20/2021 6:58:00 PM
"Have you ever desired so much that your body trembles and quakes, shivers and shakes" YES !! I have. Oh my !! This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Your thoughts bring a smile and make me blush, all at the same time. :) Brandy
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