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Have Pity On the Moon

I just had a heart to heart With my friend the moon Says he misses the two of us And wonders what became of me and you Says he misses the both of us On our nightly strolls up lovers lane Of course he misses us more at night But still knows you're not around during the day He asked me if there was a chance That we'd get back together soon You know I would hate to disappoint My good friend the moon Told me he misses when we took Those walks along the beach And that he's the one that kept the tide Just within our reach Also that he shown his moonlight To bring your beauty out at every glance The moon he really wants to know If you'd give us a second chance He'd love for us to try and work it out By myself my life has not a clue If you don't think you could do it for me Please have pity on the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/21/2017 8:28:00 AM
When the moon hits your eye like a big pizza pie thats amore; and thats what this wonderful poem is about; awesome love poem Mike!~Che :)
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Date: 7/19/2017 10:40:00 AM
This is a REAL love poem, Mike. I love it!
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Date: 7/19/2017 9:11:00 AM
Oh sad and wonderful! Lovely write Mike ;) xomo
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Date: 7/19/2017 7:56:00 AM
This is a great poem Mike. So well written and I love how you spoke to the moon :)
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Date: 7/19/2017 7:47:00 AM
That heart to heart with the moon just might do the trick! A fave, my friend!
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