Have Pity On the Moon

I just had a heart to heart
With my friend the moon
Says he misses the two of us
And wonders what became of me and you

Says he misses the both of us
On our nightly strolls up lovers lane
Of course he misses us more at night
But still knows you're not around during the day

He asked me if there was a chance
That we'd get back together soon
You know I would hate to disappoint
My good friend the moon

Told me he misses when we took
Those walks along the beach
And that he's the one that kept the tide
Just within our reach

Also that he shown his moonlight
To bring your beauty out at every glance
The moon he really wants to know
If you'd give us a second chance

He'd love for us to try and work it out
By myself my life has not a clue
If you don't think you could do it for me
Please have pity on the moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hoffman Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 8:28 AM
When the moon hits your eye like a big pizza pie thats amore; and thats what this wonderful poem is about; awesome love poem Mike!~Che :)
Turner Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 10:40 AM
This is a REAL love poem, Mike. I love it!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Oh sad and wonderful! Lovely write Mike ;) xomo
Sands Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 7:56 AM
This is a great poem Mike. So well written and I love how you spoke to the moon :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 7:47 AM
That heart to heart with the moon just might do the trick! A fave, my friend!
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