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Have My Cake and Eat It, Too

My Mind just racing- debating Fate
(A thousand thoughts arrive at once!) 
I hesitate to contemplate 
The aftermath in future months 
Would I be sane to stay unknown, 
Or claim my Fame and fall Insane? 
Reap doubtful seeds myself have sewn- 
While I wonder who's to blame...

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/22/2013 10:31:00 PM I like reading your little nuggets of contemplation, Chan. Is that your name? I saw someone calling you that. thanks for reading so many of my poems recently. Let me find one more of yours to see. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/23/2013 5:16:00 AM I appreciate the read and review, Andrea. Yes, Chan is my name and I greatly enjoyed going through your work yesterday :)

Robin Davis Date: 11/22/2013 8:26:00 AM Chan Words most poets and writers can relate to. Writing can drive you insane sometimes thinking is it good enough for others and will it make me famous. Yes, your poems are good enough and you are famous as my friend. And a little insane. LOL You are making me blush with the awesome comment on my Dedication poem. I meant every word of it. Hugs Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/22/2013 8:57:00 AM Love you to pieces, Sweet Pea; thank you for writing that about me; it really helped me and brightened my day <3 <3 <3

Karen Anglesey Date: 11/19/2013 1:41:00 PM Sometimes I feel like I am on the brink... mind racing and debating fate. Oh, how I do relate :) Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/20/2013 10:08:00 AM lol Thanks, K <3 <3 <3 :)

Mark Peterson Date: 11/18/2013 9:11:00 PM Missing your comments and poetry. Hope you drop by and write again soon. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/20/2013 10:08:00 AM Will definitely catch up with you soon, my friend :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/16/2013 7:48:00 PM Who is truly known? each and everyone of us is an enigma, we often fool ourselves. Insanity may be a welcome change. Perhaps it is the insane who truly know themselves. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/17/2013 11:36:00 AM Interesting points, my friend. Thanks for the read! :)

Kennedy Muitherero Date: 11/13/2013 11:23:00 PM It's the blurry line between wants and needs, The unresolved dilemma in life. A good one this is! Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/15/2013 9:00:00 AM Thank you, Kennedy! :)

Kelly Deschler Date: 11/13/2013 6:12:00 PM There is much to ponder in this poem! Though, thinking about our thoughts does drive one insane, sometimes! A great poem, BP! I enjoyed it! Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/15/2013 9:01:00 AM Thank you, SP! <3

Mark Peterson Date: 11/13/2013 1:40:00 PM This is absolutely tops: smooth, well-crafted (my best compliment), rhyme non-tortured. Interesting thoughts. Remember, only the sane question their sanity. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/15/2013 9:01:00 AM lol True, true, Mark! Thanks for the kind words and for the read and review :)

Joseph Matose Date: 11/11/2013 12:31:00 PM Ha ha ha ha! My Friend....You spinned another surprise. This poem is great You know, I never cease questioning the direction I have taken ..that of writing! Will it leave me sane, will it get me to the desired destination, will it.....I relate to this piece in more ways than one. You've condensed so many ideas into a purified 8 lines. This style makes me respect your intellect. Loyal Friend, JM Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/12/2013 4:17:00 AM JM, you always have something humbling to say about my work and I sincerely appreciate you, my friend :)