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10.02.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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I can move mountains Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

2st place in the contest

- Have Faith -

                               
                                   You will find me fearless
                             I am master of my own strength
                            Shout out the word ; c o u r a g e
                            Always hardworking, not strenuous
                                        a beacon of hope
                                 Fearless heart, attitude bold
                                    The vision of exploring 
                                  daring to move mountains
                                                          I
                                                          promise 
                                                                    you


                                    Violent storms may attack
                                 and untested strength may fail
                                    Put the lessons on your soul
                                           ignore the brake
                              Certain things capture my attention
                                       The steadfast Edelweiss
                                           drenched in dew
                                         Breath of almighty
                                                          I
                                                          promise 
                                                                   you
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Xiang Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 11:40 AM
You are courageous, indeed, by your lexicon. Continue to be the edelweiss growing deep in your soul and let it blossom. I'll be on the edge of my seat watching your next unfurling.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 6:56 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Triny :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 8:20 PM
A beautiful strong poem Anne-Lise Anyone with the faith to move mountains is to be believed. Your poem is like an affirmation to stir the heart and encourage ones heart to become fearless. The vision of the Edelweiss standing tall and strong is perfect. A fave for me. Truly lovely.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 6:56 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, S.V. :) - hugs
Parker Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 9:26 AM
each one of us is the Queen or King of our own kingdom, we are the ones who choose to be defeated or not, your poem reflects this truth...good luck in the contest
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 6:55 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Frederic :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 5:51 AM
Powerful words of inspiration, Anne-Lise. A poem that aspires to reach beyond mountains!
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 6:55 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs
Sharma  Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 10:44 PM
Wow, this is an inspiring and uplifting poem, dear Anne-Lise.. You've impeccably woven a tapestry of strength and resilience in your artistic words..I especially love how you've written "You will find me fearless I am master of my own strength", "a beacon of hope", "drenched in dew Breath of almighty I promise you" Gosh, such amazing descriptions throughout. Sending many best wishes and light your way, keep shining and writing always! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 6:55 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Hiya :) - hugs
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 3:24 PM
Being faithful is very great in my view. Nice reading! Have a nice time lovely sweet Anne-Lise ~ AA
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 6:54 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, A.A. :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 12:25 PM
Having faith can help you achieve anything that sometimes often seems impossible. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Tom
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 6:54 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - hugs
Greenhough Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 12:24 PM
The photograph and poem were inspirational Good luck.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 6:54 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Hilda :) - hugs
One Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 10:56 AM
An inspirational and take on the contest, which shows your support and devotions.. Best of luck in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 11:04 AM
- Yes, supportive one could say ... a poem in its simplicity :) - Many thanks for your comment, S.O. :) - hugs
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