Have a Heart

Wow! Carol, this is short and powerful!

Reading some of your older poems, just love this. Happy new Year. love harry

Dang, Carol. YOu have deleted so many poems. I now have no older ones of yours to go and comment on! Hope to see more and more from you.

Your heart is full of wisdom, it can never break and hence can never be at risk, my friend. bl

love it, its beautiful =^_^=

wow! carol.. where are all of your poems... please let me know..p.d.

Carol, I see you don't have your older poems here any more. I will miss that because I enjoy going back and seeing poems of the poets whose recent ones I've already viewed. Why did you do it? Anyway, soupmail me sometime if you want! This is a nice little senryu. Luv, Andrea

This is just wonderful, bringing out the most precious thing each and everybody have which is LOVE, and for you to say these words do not use it at as a toy many still do.

Very emotive Carol well done Don xo

subtle calling, so enthralling, as she waits, to find him right. Don

Indeed, well-said Carol. I love short and meaningful writes.

I have heard that saying all of my life, as we all have, but to see it in a beautiful poem like you wrote here, touches me deeply. a beautiful write.

Lovely senryu, Carol. Hope you're having a great day : )

Apologies, I didn't rate your poem with my first comment. Still learning :) See you soon. -Rob

Hi Carol, thanks for the warm welcome. I have been studying this type of poem, for I am very new to poetry. There are so many forms! Who knew? lol I like your poem and despise men who use women. The world doesn't need any more playboys. Many men are like this, and at times I am ashamed to be a member of the male gender. Great message Carol. I know a few (alot) of guys that should read this....but won't. Thanks again for your kind comments, see you soon :) -Rob

A good write with a great message......... George

A sweet Senryu...a beautiful loving thought...stay well Carol, have a lovely weekend...huggs , gautami

Hoping all is well with u my friend.. have not seen u and missed u on P.S. .. please keep in touch my friend.. luv..

Lovely Senryu Carol, short but meaning. Have a terrific week also....:)

DESE 3 LINES MAKE A VERY BEAUTIFUL SENSE CAROL... NYCC WRITING.. ND THANKU VERY MUCH 4 UR SUCH A LOVELY N MOTIVATING COMMENTS.. LOVE..RUPAM..:)

Enjoyed your Senyru, Carol. Well done. like the last line esp.

Nice poem Carol. Thanks a lot for a warm welcome.

so true here nice thoughts

hello Carol, wonderful Senryu, (and the words ring so true)

nicely, said,,,,, enjoyed,..p.d.