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Have a Heart

As you bring forth joy Do not use me as a toy My heart is at risk

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Carl Nel

Date: 9/29/2012 9:18:00 AM

Wow! Carol, this is short and powerful!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/2/2012 3:27:00 AM

Reading some of your older poems, just love this. Happy new Year. love harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2011 10:10:00 PM

Dang, Carol. YOu have deleted so many poems. I now have no older ones of yours to go and comment on! Hope to see more and more from you.

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/6/2011 11:33:00 AM

Your heart is full of wisdom, it can never break and hence can never be at risk, my friend. bl

Brenda Barricklow

Date: 11/30/2011 1:40:00 PM

love it, its beautiful =^_^=

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 8:16:00 AM

wow! carol.. where are all of your poems... please let me know..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2011 9:36:00 AM

Carol, I see you don't have your older poems here any more. I will miss that because I enjoy going back and seeing poems of the poets whose recent ones I've already viewed. Why did you do it? Anyway, soupmail me sometime if you want! This is a nice little senryu. Luv, Andrea

Tamoiya Hill

Date: 10/11/2011 7:47:00 PM

This is just wonderful, bringing out the most precious thing each and everybody have which is LOVE, and for you to say these words do not use it at as a toy many still do.

Don Johnson

Date: 5/19/2011 11:16:00 PM

Very emotive Carol well done Don xo

Don Johnson

Date: 5/19/2011 11:13:00 PM

subtle calling, so enthralling, as she waits, to find him right. Don

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 5/16/2011 5:28:00 PM

Indeed, well-said Carol. I love short and meaningful writes.

James Foulk

Date: 5/16/2011 3:53:00 PM

I have heard that saying all of my life, as we all have, but to see it in a beautiful poem like you wrote here, touches me deeply. a beautiful write.

Jack Horne

Date: 5/16/2011 12:56:00 PM

Lovely senryu, Carol. Hope you're having a great day : )

Robert Ginter

Date: 5/16/2011 9:12:00 AM

Apologies, I didn't rate your poem with my first comment. Still learning :) See you soon. -Rob

Robert Ginter

Date: 5/16/2011 8:42:00 AM

Hi Carol, thanks for the warm welcome. I have been studying this type of poem, for I am very new to poetry. There are so many forms! Who knew? lol I like your poem and despise men who use women. The world doesn't need any more playboys. Many men are like this, and at times I am ashamed to be a member of the male gender. Great message Carol. I know a few (alot) of guys that should read this....but won't. Thanks again for your kind comments, see you soon :) -Rob

George Aul

Date: 5/14/2011 11:04:00 AM

A good write with a great message......... George