Haunting Saxaphone

I am sitting the patio, the sun is slowly sinking
and Hazel is talking to me. Asking if my coffee
is ok while she gently sips her tea,  she talks to 
me of her feelings, of the closeness that is there.
Growing in the warm ambience, the pull of two
hearts needing satisfaction. The air is tranquil
and the words soft, there is music on her breath,
haunting , mesmerising to the point of infinity.
Her emotions lie at my feet as she asks of me
“ Will you “ , my answer can only be forever.
And to the dulcet melody my eyes close and 
my journey begins. Thank you Hazel.


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Hazel Oconnor

Will you

Steve Cook music 4.46 duration
and bathe in the Saxaphone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 4, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Very cool and very 80s- A lot of good memories back then
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March 14, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Interesting write that was influenced by the music....Kinda sad tune..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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March 13, 2010 at 4:24 AM
Daniel... thankxxx ..the video and voice were phenomenal .. luv that sexy sax .. appreciate the reference at the end of your dynamic poem... I have a new blog posted if u care to comment...and thankxxx if u do...luv.. "Sweetheart"
Sweetheart Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 10:12 PM
My favorite instrument .. will definitely check out the video Daniel.. that caused u to create this amazing write tonight... such a dreamy delight...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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March 12, 2010 at 9:05 PM
Nice poem....enjoyed reading tonight...will check out youtube soon...Marty
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March 12, 2010 at 4:56 PM
enjoyed
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March 12, 2010 at 11:45 AM
a piece of the song goes like this'Take of your eyes,bare your soul,gather me to you and make me whole'-that is a lovely song and you did it honor..and don't spill your tea:)lovely--Charma
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March 12, 2010 at 10:25 AM
I just lose myself in music sometimes...audible poetry isn't it ...and you have the perfect accompaniment to yours and hazels story......Lovely, Daniel......Alie
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March 12, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Daniel.Rgds Brian
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March 12, 2010 at 6:25 AM
I'll have to check out the tune, Daniel. My father died last year and he played the saxaphone (as well as the clarinet and harmonica) in a seniors' band until his sudden stroke. Your poem brought back the joy I felt when I listened to him play. Thanks so much! Love, Carolyn
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