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Haunting Night

Screaming at piercing eyes haunting each night Tortured soul laments, grimacing in pain While canine pet wildly howls amidst fright Plaguing serene home with nervousness’ strain… Drawn to door, ushered toward hellish pit Shocked heart struggles against darkness’ embrace As kitten’s frame glows, showing lion’s grit Engulfing house with shrieks of grievous chase… Horrified by ceaseless tormenting wail Anxious mind seeks peace from chaotic spree Since ghost whispers persistently assail Inviting bats, now swarming, flying free… Turning on lights, scampering spirit shouts “Oh, Lord, I’m so afraid; help* me, my God” Shutting screen, "I confess need for faith routes Why scare myself when I have prayer rod.”
*Isaiah 41:13 - For I the LORD thy God will hold thy right hand, saying unto thee, Fear not; I will help thee. October 24, 2022 5th place, "12-16 Lines of a Scary Halloween Rhyme" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 10/30/2022.

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Date: 10/30/2022 4:44:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative Halloween poem!
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Date: 10/25/2022 7:47:00 AM
Beata, you have painted a vivid picture of terror and the brightness of the environment that threatens it. We require the use of our supplication wand!    I am grateful for the lovely comments you have left on my page.
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Date: 10/25/2022 5:24:00 AM
Great imagery of fear and the light of the world that assails it. We need our prayer rod! The Great Shepherd herds us in and beats off the enemy. God bless you, sweet one!
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Date: 10/25/2022 2:30:00 AM
keep using that prayer rod my friend, its the best tool anyone can own :)
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