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               Oct 30, 2024, placed 2nd in Tania Kitchin's Haunted contest

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Jay’s older brothers used to torture him. They’d say, “Let’s have a harmless bit of fun”~~ then tell him tales about a red-eyed ghost. Poor little Jay would tremble, scream, and run. The plots they wove grew scarier with time. They bragged about their creativity. They didn’t know what Jay had known for years: there WAS a ghost that only he could see. It hovered in the woods behind their house and peered at Jay, who often played outside alone at dusk, or in his room at night and looking out his window. “Stop!” he cried. He wished the ghost would haunt his mean old brothers instead of him, and then those glowing eyes, he saw no more. His brothers changed! They were subdued and nice to him, to his surprise.

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Date: 12/1/2024 8:12:00 PM
Great spooky story, Janice. Enjoyed reading. I love the ending
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Date: 10/30/2024 4:55:00 PM
You’ll never go wrong with a tale of spooky comeuppance. Serves em right. Enjoyed your spooky win, Janice. Terry
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/1/2024 7:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Terry! Janice
Date: 10/27/2024 10:12:00 PM
A very positive ending to the story! This is a poem quite different from the ordinary spooky poems of Halloween. Congratulations Janice on your high placement.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2024 6:19:00 AM
Thanks so much, Valsa! Janice
Date: 10/27/2024 9:00:00 PM
lovely write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2024 6:18:00 AM
Thanks so much, Thriveni! Janice
Date: 10/27/2024 11:17:00 AM
Congrats on the list. A well deserved win
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/27/2024 11:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 10/27/2024 8:45:00 AM
Nice work, Janice! I like it! Congrats!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/27/2024 11:56:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jim! Janice
Date: 10/27/2024 8:13:00 AM
Janice, I enjoyed your spooky tale, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/27/2024 11:56:00 AM
Tania, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Date: 10/18/2024 3:38:00 AM
Dear janice, you are an excellent storyteller, this is written in a very engaging manner. Poor lil kid. I smiled when i read “ He wished the ghost would haunt his mean old brothers” awwn! Such innocence! And so fitting for halloween too. Very well woven. One of those poems that readers would wish it to never end. I love it! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/18/2024 7:25:00 AM
Ink Empress, you have made my day with your response to my poem!! You are SO supportive of your fellow poets! I am honored that you liked this. Janice
Date: 10/17/2024 11:25:00 PM
A spooky one for sure Janice, I think everyone is getting in the Halloween mood lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/18/2024 8:37:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice

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