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Haunted With Dreams

In Haunting night falling into dream, in softness a cloud glowed at the seams Bounced into rain I was soaking up love, rain brought blessings and sings of the dove Falling with stars ash flaming past, I juggle the planets as comets streak fast Dipping my toe in the milky way, I play air hockey with dwarfs all day Asteroids rolling and in rotating space, a Goliath of rock in peril we face And far in the reaches feeling heartbeats of life, I look to the sky to find forever tonight Opening my eyes and looking outside, I wonder if dreams really do come alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/15/2009 1:50:00 PM
it's truly been awhile Mrs. Eggins or shall i call you Jayne? I have only updated with one new poem which i added several minutes ago but i didn't write it, it was a freestyle or freeverse if you will i once again applaud you and thank you ever so much for all your support and consideration.
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Date: 10/13/2009 5:01:00 PM
Dreams certainly do come alive in this poem, Jayne! Love the thought of "dipping (your) toe in the Milky Way." Very creative! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2009 10:03:00 AM
An out of this world poem Jayne >> James
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Date: 10/10/2009 8:42:00 AM
I really like this one. Very good imaination! I like the dwarfs, lol :) -RayvnEyez
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