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Haunted Orb

Luna's specter glows
   Gazing at her reflection
In the black night sea







Inspired by Raul's "Reflections" contest

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Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/1/2010 5:32:00 AM

Always top notch writing from you. This is magical as it provides wonderful imagery with a smooth flow and the perfect tone. Excellent writing my dear friend! Michael

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/20/2010 4:08:00 PM

ahhhhhhh perfection! To my fav's Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 1/17/2010 8:19:00 AM

A beautiful and vivid picture you paint with your words here Donna. My mind's eye could plainly see the moon's reflection in the dark sea. God bless Donna, Sincerely, Love, Moses

Sue Mason

Date: 1/3/2010 1:47:00 PM

Beautiful imagery here in just a few words ... smile good luck in the contest, Donna !

Gert W. Knop

Date: 12/31/2009 7:37:00 AM

Hi Donna, wishing you a happy New Year! I am online again after many weeks of being offline. Had no time yet for posting new poems. What a nice Haiku and picture of moon and sea! Love, Gert

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/17/2009 8:00:00 PM

I posted a new poem 12/17/09

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/13/2009 8:44:00 PM

I posted a new poem.

P Sheart

Date: 12/13/2009 1:49:00 PM

You have soup mail! Love Light Patricia

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/13/2009 9:44:00 AM

Love the title and the poem rocked also, so short and powerful. Enjoy this gem and also have a great sundy. Have a great sunday. :):)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/11/2009 2:53:00 AM

Nice haiku best wishes in the contest. Congratulatioins on being featured on the hot list. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/8/2009 9:19:00 AM

Good morning,hope all is well.

Sue Mason

Date: 12/8/2009 6:33:00 AM

Great haiku here, Donna !! Hope you have a wonderful holiday and that 2010 is a great year for your and yours!!

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/7/2009 10:23:00 PM

Why do you not recently write ... the night is dark without your inspired light. One love

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/5/2009 5:56:00 PM

I posted a christmas poem

Date: 12/4/2009 4:22:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and personification for a creative view. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Marty Owens

Date: 12/3/2009 9:13:00 PM

How did I miss this beautiful Haiku...Enjoyed..Marty

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/3/2009 9:05:00 AM

I love the image of "Luna's specter"...this is such a beautiful haiku! ~Juliane

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 12:48:00 AM

WoW! Raul's contest inspired some incredible Haiku's. this is one of them. Beautiful, Donna. Love, Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/2/2009 2:34:00 PM

Wow, this is a wonderful image, Donna! Best wishes for success in the contest with this lovely haiku. Love, Carolyn

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/2/2009 1:16:00 PM

And a reflection she gives...Wonderfully written..Very visual...RdP

Daniel Perez

Date: 12/2/2009 7:59:00 AM

Nicely put...this one really draws my attention good visual image

Cecil Hickman

Date: 12/1/2009 10:45:00 PM

a definite winner written with depth and imagination while deeply defining the picture of inspiration wonderfully titled as well,,,Blessings..Cecil,,,and Thank you for holding contests for my inspration as well as others and for the words you leave behind upon mine.

Naomi Jenkins

Date: 12/1/2009 7:21:00 PM

I can imagine this being written in the sand...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2009 12:44:00 PM

Interesting idea for the contest sponsored by Raul. Good luck. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2009 8:37:00 AM

Good luck in Raul's contest, Donna dear, but by your entry luck is not necessary as from title to words this haiku has captivated the reader... wonderful visual and the moon is quite haunting sometimes... my entry is Revelation ... every poet has seen a special view of Raul's photo.. fascinating.. blessings ...luv.. thankxxx for being a dear friend... Linda-Marie... "Sweetheart"

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