M. L. Kiser Poet Choka

Haunted Ocean

Haunted Old Ocean;
Specters swim throughout the sea;
For many a good ship has,
Met its final doom;
Within the tempestuous,
Waters and cannot move on.
On stormy nights you 
May see a ghostly visage;
A ship that no longer sails.
Know that beneath lay,
One in its watery tomb;
It’s calling to warn…”Danger”!
Its last memory
Before fate let the waters,
Collect another victim.

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Gary Bateman September 21, 2018 at 2:30 PM Hello MLK, A "haunted ocean" -- eh?? A wondrous description here for sure. A journey I should not like to undertake. Excellent Verse!! Best Always, Gary M. L. Kiser September 21, 2018 at 5:34 PM Yes, they keep building cruise ships bigger and heavier and although that weight floats...under the right circumstances it may cease to do so. Thanks again, Gary.

Caren Krutsinger September 21, 2018 at 7:22 AM And M.L., this poem is a reminder of why I will never be on a ship - cruise or otherwise. I saw the Titanic, and decided "never" and now this seals it. M. L. Kiser September 21, 2018 at 5:33 PM That's kind of the way I feel, despite having been on a speed boat and a my cousin's little boat before. I've no fears with the smaller boats but, I don't trust the big ones. Actually it's the companies that build them that I don't trust...there's just too much weight to sink with me on it. Thanks for reading and commenting again.

Jan Allison September 21, 2018 at 7:12 AM brilliantly descriptive ML, I am currently writing a poem about the sea - not my favourite form of transport and I feel chilled now I've read your ghostly poem:-) hugs jan xx M. L. Kiser September 21, 2018 at 5:31 PM You know, I love the ocean; have been out on my cousin's boat but, I doubt that I could ever bring myself to take a cruise. This was inspired by some photos of the, "Titanic", that I was recently viewing. Being so close to Halloween, I just thought it might make a decent poem. Thanks for dropping by again.

Demetrios Trifiatis September 21, 2018 at 7:03 AM Marvelously intriguing my friend, MLK! M. L. Kiser September 21, 2018 at 5:28 PM Thanks again.