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October- 21- 2025

A Spooky Haunted Poem Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

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Haunted House

The house looks so imposing and majestic from outside
With a wide yard and a porch surrounded by ornamental railings
It was situated on a hill with pine trees partly covering it from view,
Rumour runs, at night from there, people hear strange wailings.

           Scoffing it as the weird fancy of crazy minds,
           I was so eager to prove the irrationality of it.
           One night I ascended the hill leading to that cosy mansion.
           Close to the house but safely distant, I noticed a narrow pit.

Though I walked around, nothing seemed unusual about it.
When I was about to leave as a proud victor after a thorough search,
I saw a skeletal figure emerging from the pit and rising into air wailing.
In horror, as I looked on, like a bird, on the pine branch, it did perch.
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George Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 1:06 AM
'Spooktacular' is a new word for me. Thank you Tania for the placement given and teaching me a new word.
Kitchin Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:10 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooktacular spooky tale.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Haunted House" write/story. Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away with your win..............
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Good and scary description here. Congrats, Valsa
Guptar Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations, dear Valsa, on your win in this contest with a spooky detailed narrative that slowly leads us to a chilling end. Wishing you the blessings of light.
Poet Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:52 AM
What a spooky tale! Well done, Valsa. Congratulations on your contest-winning place.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 5:56 PM
the ending was a definite surprise, Valsa. Your poem was hauntingly surreal and captivating
Narain Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:33 AM
This poem is a well-crafted ghost narrative — evocative, atmospheric, and traditional in tone, yet with a memorable twist at the end. The imagery lingers — that skeletal figure in the moonlight feels both haunting and symbolic of disbelief transformed into fearful awe.
Leake Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 9:12 AM
nicely written Valsa Enjoyed this good haunting poem Best wishes Kevin
Hamilton Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 4:19 AM
I love the imagery of your write Valsa just the right spookiness to it hugs Shadow
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