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Tania Kitchin's Haunted contest    October 15, 2024

Haunted House

On the outskirts of town there's a house on Brooding Hill
that leaves those who pass by with shivers and a chill.
It's rumored that murders have taken place in the home
since it's been haunted by ghosts and ghouls who roam.

It's surrounded by a forest where shadows take to flight
and whispers echo upon the wind on a full moon night.
Red eyes stare out of windows from skeletons that talk
and no one ever dares to go near that house after dark.

Crows perch on moss draped limbs of trees, long dead.
Their caws summon the master goblin lesser demons dread.
The stench of death lingers near when screams are heard
begging help from graves where bodies have been interred.

That macabre haunted house is not a place I will ever enter.
Gossip around town is that it's soon to have another renter,
but it won't take long before they will feel the terror and fear
when in the house on Brooding hill, hobgoblins will appear.
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Davey Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 11:54 PM
Congrats on yourwin
Flood Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 4:16 PM
Damn it, Lin. I’m off to bed shortly… and it’s dark up there. A most enjoyable scare story. Congrats. Terry
Lane Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 5:08 PM
lol Terry. turn on the lights! Thanks.
mysore Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:45 PM
you excel. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Lane Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 5:08 PM
Thank you very much.
Kauffman Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 11:46 AM
Truly haunting, Lin! Indeed, a place to avoid! Congratulations on your win. Blessings. :o!
Lane Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 5:09 PM
Thank you, Sam.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 11:22 AM
The stench of death lingers near when screams are heard begging help from graves where bodies have been interred…congrats on your win!
Lane Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 5:09 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Healey Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Great imagery, Lin. Very enjoyable. Congrats on your win. Well done.
Lane Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 5:09 PM
Thanks ever so much, Jim.
Kitchin Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:12 AM
Lin, I enjoyed your scary tale, love the imagery, congratulations on your first place win.
Lane Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:15 AM
Thanks so much, Tania. I loved writing this one.
Beaufort Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Lin, my goodness...it sounds like quite a place. This is a lot of fun for those not faint of heart! Smiles. Hmmm, I was just thinking about the most horrible monster of them all who could inhabit such a place...can you guess who I have in mind? Smiles!!
Lane Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 7:15 AM
lol Duke. I have a few beasties and brutes in mind, but I'll avoid their haunting by not naming them. Thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 8:18 AM
Quite a spooky tale you paint with your words Lin, a perfect Halloween poem. Love the accompanying photo. Tom
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 8:36 AM
G'afternoon to you, Tom and thanks a bunch. I'm sure we'll be writing lots of spooky themed poetry in the next couple of weeks.
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