Notes About The Poem

This poem is for Tania Kitchin's contest.

My poem is based on a true story. 

Haunted Cemetery

Was the new grave pulling his leg,
shaking the particles on edge,
using green wind so close to ledge,
an open invite without hedge?

Was the voice, down under, his own?
Could it levitate, draw one back,
and call to his brother from black,
as he’d become a ghost off track?

Haunting, unsettling, not subtle.
Do surrounding stones shriek, unmask?
Does spookiness take him to task?
For help, the fallen has to ask.

Daunting, the shadows, seem to claw,
as a brother must find dug hole.
It’s much too soon to take his soul,
but still sooner, in fact, bell’s toll.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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mysore Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 9:25 PM
you caught us by your first line. lovely imagery dear poet. congratulations on your win. cheers.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, Thriveni!
Kitchin Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:29 AM
Kim, a chilling poem, congratulations on your winning placement.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 11:18 AM
Thank you, Tania!
George Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 9:32 PM
It sounds so scary! I can't believe that it is real. While I was a child, I used to believe in all such stuff. But now I don't believe in ghosts or wicked spirits roaming outside. Of course there resides demons within man. Your poem is really spooky, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 11:18 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Hind Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 3:24 PM
Very tragic- almost intentionally so... very heavy stuff, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 4:22 PM
Yes. Thank you for your comment. I appreciate you letting me know what you thought.
Proxenos Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 6:02 AM
Such a scary tale and true which makes it scarier, but only you could create it in such an eloquent and clever style Kim. Blessing and hugs Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 6:25 AM
Thank you, Jennifer! Hugs and blessings.
Bell Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 3:03 AM
It definitely all happens down the cemetery. I'll maybe stop using it as a shortcut now.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 4:55 AM
Especially if you are by yourself!
Gasun Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 12:42 AM
A captivating scarry story indeed my dear poet friend Kim! When I read your note that this is a true story, I got goosebumps. Thanks for sharing. So enjoyed immensely. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Thank you, Len! Blessings to you too! Hugs :)
Greenhough Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 6:39 PM
It's scary. It is a wonderful poem for Halloween. I like the story. Good luck with the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 7:04 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
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