Haunted By a Long Lost Love

Haunted by a Long Lost Love The world before me is a venomous vampire As your venom seeps thru my window sill Nestled by nocturnal night breathing dragons fire Cuddled by the corner of my room a slaving still For I am haunted by a long lost love My prayers are lost as they drift on high For they escape below and so above As I watch the gilded leaves of autumn sigh On a passing cloud there floats a dream Where your ghost will end its phantom fright But for now, I let loose a silent scream Echoes of love, silhouettes in moonlight My heart sings a broken saddened song For I sit in solitude beside the towering trees Waiting for someone else to come along Caressed by the soft song of a summers breeze. Aug.30.2018 One In Five II Poetry Sponsored by: Joseph May N/A for contest
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Sietesantos Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Wow, WW - this is such a beautiful, haunting piece of the beloved one who has left but whose presence is still strongly felt. You so skillfully and creatively applied all five phrases in such a wonderful way even using rhymes! This is a fave in my books and surely a winner in the contest! Love and hugs. Pandita
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 8:54 AM
I love the line: Nestled by nocturnal night breathing dragons fire
Nicole Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Being haunted by a long lost love is enough to make a heart slow down- a scream release in the dark of night. Your thoughts are mysterious and hold many emotions. I have posted something you might like, read it when you can. It's called "Tangled Inside" ~ Brandy
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Hello Winged Warrior, I can picture the person waiting for the person to come along.Waiting to see who it will be. Have a nice evening my friend.
Pandit Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Excellent poetry WW..you always shine my friend..best for a win.
Ashley Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Your superb poem moves me with its haunting beauty, Winged Warrior a.k.a. Wicked Warrior.. lol! A splendid and poignant piece with fantastic emotional imagery and great use of the contest phrases. Best wishes for a win my poetic sib.. lol! :)) ~Suse
Green Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 3:25 PM
I absolutely loved this poem. This is exactly how it should be written. Bravo my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Sands Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Wow this is perfect WW. I can feel it as I read it and you did so well with all the phrases! Well done :)
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