Haunted

Tiptoeing inside an entrance that held 
unknown mysteries of a slain clan,
draped photographs flickered with
low-lit candelabras of Halloween eve.
I ran up the steps as my heels
cracked on through a nightfall's twirl ... 
the moon quivering like a ghoul's shadow 
while rotten windows banged!
And the door reeled of odor around walls,
sipping the pungent air that hindered
my echoes from squeaking heavily
among a pile of crushed leaves.

Interior bleakness brought more dread
as tendrils of red mould hanged on cobwebs
dripping like spurts of blood...alone,
I turned to leave: my skirt rushing away
from the ancient house and its eerie view.
Glancing at the ruined structure 
from a distance, fallen grasses 
seemed to blink: my disheveled hair
meshing on a ripped treat- o- trick basket
as I quickly escaped, panting

into the thick fog without a candle in the mist.



Your Own Favorite Halloween Contest
Sponsor: Carol Eastman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your own favorite Halloween Poem. Take Care **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 11:34 PM
Awesome write n win nette! Big congrats!
Tor Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Nice win nette!
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 5:29 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Eastman Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 4:32 PM
Thank You for entering my contest with your Halloween poem. Have a Happy Halloween!
Kayode Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Oh Nette ,the moon shook,wonderful; congrats on this outstanding Performance.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations on your win Nette. Incredible haunting story.
Callus Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 11:36 AM
Haunting imagery and personification contribute to a captivating write. Congratulations on a deserved win, Nette!! // paul
Yvonne Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Back to congratulate you on your fine win.
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 7:50 AM
dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
Deschler Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 9:53 PM
The very detailed imagery just added a wonderful creepiness to this ghost story. A chilling tale that got my heart pounding! Congrats on your win, Nette!
Horstkotter Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 6:12 PM
Great poem. Great read.
Austin Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Good Halloween stuff, nette, I like the way you describe bodily effects, Love, daver
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 3:45 PM
oh I feel chilled reading this Nette - an awesome write:-) hugs Jan xxx
Onat Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 12:48 PM
All the elements of classic suspense woven together. Impressive work, Words! Perfect ending, Nette, hauntingly creepy.
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 11:51 AM
- Chilling reading ..... you need a hand to hold, dear Nette ! - Enjoy reading ....... exciting - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 11:06 AM
O Creepy feel..... Spine chilling imagery. Vivid description spooky....
Gonza Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Heart-pumping scenes here which make my jaw drop. Terrific poem, Nette, and glad to see I got your nod in the florette contest. Thank you!
Mehta Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:10 AM
Very scary write, nette, giving thrills while reading. Is it for a contest?
Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..It reads like a very scary place..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visits ..Sara
Yvonne Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 9:51 PM
Excellent!!!!
Paras Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Freakingly excellent. I'm beginning to like how you play with this genre. Wow, Nette.
Lindley Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 8:39 PM
I could feel your fright as I read. That is magic in the reading my friend!!! Bravo!!!!!
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