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Haunted

The hallway flashes dead blue The cells burn, veins spread out like branches The white feet which soles barely touch the floor As violins shriek in the background The pit flashes a streak of light on the glass Turn, turn too late This room is cold and contagious, like his smile Smiling back at me Face white, cold metal where eyes should be mirror, you lie, distort and then, tell the fallen to rise again niaga esir ot nellaf eht llet ,neht dna trotsid ,eil ouy ,rorrim And I'm haunted By the ills that I have done By cracks that I created

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/10/2014 2:32:00 PM
I like your poetry, Jeremy; don't go wandering off again.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:20:00 AM
Hahahaha. I can't promise that. I'm a drifter and I can only do this stuff when I feel really inspired. But I will always be back!
Date: 8/8/2014 1:59:00 PM
Yikes! I like..:-) :-) :-)
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:20:00 AM
Thanks Donna!!!
Date: 8/8/2014 12:16:00 AM
oohhh, the tone is so creepy but that makes for a very good haunted poem!! GREAT Ending on it too, Jeremy.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/8/2014 12:07:00 PM
Thank you! I kind of scared my self when I was writing it. Goosebumps.

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