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Haunted

A child is born in a world of the unknown. If only he knew what was really going on. The cruelty he was shown will haunt his very dreams. He is hated, and despised, or that’s how it seems. I’m haunted by the pain of life is what he screams. No one knows what goes on in and abused mind. Please don’t look you won’t like what you find. His heart is still breaking; it won’t go away in this life time. Haunted, by a child hood that will always make him walk a fine line He doesn’t want sorrow, or any ones pity. He already thinks life isn’t pretty. His spirit may be broken buts it’s not gone. Haunted? Yes but he’s not alone. He’ll be haunted until he’s dead and gone. November 28-2008 By JD Couch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/6/2016 10:11:00 AM
JD Couch, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/24/2016 11:10:00 AM
JD Couch, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*"
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Date: 2/22/2010 7:45:00 AM
I have entered this poem in the poetry contest on here they told me I was able to only put one on here because of that. do you think this poem is contest worthy I sure hope so but we as writers and lovers of the spoken word may never know I appreciate any and all feed back and suggestions on this work thanks JD Couch
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Date: 2/22/2010 5:28:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup JD. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. To answer how many you may submit at once. A good number would be perhaps 5 per day. If you put a great many at one time they will not be read. We just try to be fair to all the poets here. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:50:00 PM
how many can we submit at a time
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Date: 2/21/2010 3:41:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all ..as this delight tonight... sad..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/21/2010 9:10:00 AM
I guess things happen that haunt us all at one time or another
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:34:00 AM
so sad
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