Haunt

HAUNT Phantom Poltergeist in the darkened room cold hands pushed me from bed the ghost made her presence known “Things do go bump in the dark night”
9-13-2020 Pyramids Poetry Contest Joseph May sponsor The Clarity Pyramid is a poetry form designed and constructed by Jerry P. Quinn. A Clarity Pyramid is a poem consisting of two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all). Usually, this poem is center aligned when displayed. The first triplet has 1, 2, and 3 syllables. The title of the poem is the one-syllable word of the first triplet, which is displayed in all capital letters. This line is followed by a two-syllable line, and then a three-syllable line, both of which clarify the definition of the poem, or are synonyms for the title. The second triplet has 5, 6, and 7 syllables. Its design is based around a life event or memory contained within the triplet which helps give a poetic view or outlook on the first line (title). The last line is 8 syllables, and is in quotations as this line contains a quote that defines the first word, which is your Title.
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Date: 9/21/2020 7:05:00 AM
This is a real scary poem - love it, congrats on your 1st placing my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/23/2020 6:20:00 AM
I guess it is getting close to Halloween for my thoughts to have turned towards the dark of night, lol. xoxox
Date: 9/20/2020 11:22:00 PM
Ooh..a scary cat I am :) As long as it's not me. Congrats on you win Jeanne.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/23/2020 6:20:00 AM
My advice? don't go to a haunted hotel, lol. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Jeanne
Date: 9/20/2020 6:20:00 PM
Wow, such a unique rendition Ms Jeanne ! Love the first 3 lines alliteration. This gonna be a FAVE...not because you gave me one but this is so uniquely beautiful !!! Congratulations!!!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/20/2020 7:26:00 PM
Thanks JCB, it was funny how it just popped into my head and it has been years since I even thought of it. :D
Date: 9/20/2020 1:42:00 PM
hey, Congrats!!!
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Date: 9/20/2020 12:25:00 PM
- Interesting and exciting :) - Congratulations on your win, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/20/2020 7:25:00 PM
Hola Anne-Lise, it was an interesting night for sure...I'm thinking I was just on edge and imagined it but it sure felt real, lol
Date: 9/20/2020 11:47:00 AM
Very nicely penned Jeanne, Congrats on your win
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/20/2020 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Joseph...a fun write!
Date: 9/20/2020 10:55:00 AM
Joseph, thanks so much for this wonderful prompt...what a memory it stirred in me...and I am so enjoying the reading of all the poems in this form. Jeanne
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Date: 9/19/2020 7:33:00 AM
I like this poem. It is very suspenseful.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/20/2020 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Mike. It was fun to remember the event too. :D Boo!
Date: 9/15/2020 8:37:00 PM
Can I come out of my barricaded fortress yet?! Is the poltergeist gone. Great effect, Jeanne. ~ Spooked, Gershon
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/16/2020 4:31:00 PM
Hola Gershwin... It happened in a little town with a small old hotel known for being haunted... While singing around a piano earlier in the night I felt a cold breeze along by back that made me instantly chilled...I was not a believer until that night...
Date: 9/15/2020 9:21:00 AM
Very chilling, will 'haunt' me (in a good way!) best wishes in the contest, Jeanne!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/16/2020 4:28:00 PM
Thanks Michelle, this really did happen!
Date: 9/13/2020 2:15:00 PM
oh I love how you did yours. GREAT job.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/16/2020 4:27:00 PM
I read your and it's fab!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/13/2020 3:58:00 PM
:D Thanks!
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